“A Year Later: Reviewing My Design Concepts a Year after Publication”

William Harris

For this assignment, I went back and took a look at my concepts for the outlet magazine that a graphic design class that I was in published last year!!

I designed 5 seperate pieces, one of which was selected for publication. 

Let’s take a look at that one, and use it to break down how the design process worked.

Here's my process for my piece that was selected for publication:

Bearing Worry!

The poem was about becoming attached to your anxiety, and holding on to it even when it is unhealthy for you. I explored this mainly through a visual of a person attached to a dark cloud that was consuming them, but that they held onto nonetheless.

I came up with the idea after doing some scribbling, which I thought accurately represented how my anxiety felt. I liked the idea of those scribbles consuming or holding someone back from their truest potential.

FINAL

I started with a big blobby guy, but replaced it with a photo of my friend...

Honestly, looking at my earlier concepts… I like most of them better than what I ended up with. They feel less messy to me. However, this is the direction that I was pushed by my professor and I think the messaging is more clean? The concept itself is just way harder to read, and messier in general.

I wish I had used a photo of my friend in the position I had the blobby guy in in that second photo. I think the lying down is messy and unclear. I like the image of her holding on to the anxiety and wish I had gone with that.

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Love and Infatuation

Concepting Phase

Love and Infatuation was a hard piece for me to nail down. I knew I wanted to play with contrast immediatley, but couldn’t figure out how much was too much. A lot of these early drafts are sloppy and I’m very much not proud of them.

However, I think I needed to get them out. As you can see, I slowly but surely move towards a cleaner, more readible design, you’ll see that evident in where we end up as well.

FINAL

I love this piece!! If I’m being honest, I wish it was selected for publication, but I also admittedly made a few polishing choices after it was submitted that made it work better than I what I had initially submitted. I’m incredibly proud of this final design, but I think the way I got here was very rocky, which I think is evidenced by the fact that I didn’t even have it solidified in a way that I liked it until after publication.

CONCLUSION

I really think my designs for Femur Bone Thief, and Love and Infatuation worked. I wish I could do more refining and polishing on Bearing Worry, and Contention Vs. Conflict.

I also wish I would’ve made some significant changes to Always Say Goodbye. My instinct now is that instead of paint, I should’ve done the art with chalk, and drawn the full countries with the states inside of them rather than just showing the states. It’s hard to recognize Idaho and Michoacan without context, and it would’ve been more visually interesting.